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Robert ONeal whitworth

"Dark Crescent" by Robert ONeal whitworth

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 The space orc had lost his home planet and almost all his family.Now with a small crew he is seeking revenge.

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The ship floated freely with the motions of the moon goddess.

The crew had been asleep for over 10 years.

When the ship gleamed from the sun you could see the words "Dreambreaker."

The vessel was large enough to have a crew of one hundred, but now could only hold five.

The orc stood looking out the viewport and watching as a red dwarf floated by.

"It is not polite to walk up on your elder Lratona," said the orc.

"Well you are always watching every star that goes by sir," said Lratona.

Lratona was a tall orc female, she was a very wise, strong warrior.

"Well what is it you need." "I need a Proxo Striton," said Lratona.

"So im thinking that our engine is in need of one," said the orc.

"Yes sir." "Ok then tell Krilo that we need to go to Helios 9," said the orc.

"Trak, i am setting in the coordinates right now"said Krilo.

The ship lurched and sprang foward. The viewscreen changed from a few stars to lines.

"We will be there in five hours," said Krilo. I watched as the stars went by.

Maybe it was me, but all I wanted to do was kill everything in sight.

Of course right now that would only be my reflection.

The ship pulled out of warp outside of Helios 9.

The planet was coverd in wastlands, the perfect place for planet killers.

Planet killers were a small race that, with enough money could destroy a planet.

Planet killers are the most advanced race.

Our plan was to, hopefully, destroy there main vessal.

Stranding them and allowing us to kill them from space.

The ship came to a full stop and started orbiting the planet.

The trakion lasers sprang to life and ajusted angle to face the planet killers ship.

"Fire," said Trak. The guns fired a blazing red sphere that hit the ship and caused a huge smoke cloud to appear.

"Ha we did it we are the first to," said Trak before he stopped in aw.

The cloud dissipated and the ship was still there with not a single scratch.

A light blue shimmering field covered the ship.

 "Blast, fire everything at that ship now," said Trak.

The ship hummend and the ground was covered in explosions.

Blast after blast, the ship never gave in.

"Sir the guns have overheated," said Krilo.

"Well did we destroy the ship.""Um no s-sir they seem to be heading straight for us,"said Krilo.

The planet killers ship came at us with such speed that we had no time to react, within seconds our ship was destroyed.

The explosion covered the sky.

Two dark figures fell from the explosion.

Krilo and Trak fell from the explosion and collided with the ground.

"Get up Krilo, you have fallen from way higher altitudes,"said Trak.

"Gosh that one gave me a shocker though,"said Krilo.

"We better get moving then,"said Trak.

The two orcs moved through the forrest.

"Where are we Krilo.""The southern forrest, somewhere close to the landing pad," said Krilo.

The two orcs headed for the smoke to see if the could find there ship and get supplies.

As the orcs got closer to the wreckage they noticed three bodies.

They ran at full speed and stood next to the body.

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6 May 2012:-) Ed Edward Edwardius
Orcs in space? Now we’ve got something else to worry about! I’ll admit it; I never remotely thought there’d be any orcs orbiting up there. I like the ‘red dwarf’ mention: I guess it could be either kind.
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'Dark Crescent':
 • Created by: :-) Robert ONeal whitworth
 • Copyright: ©Robert ONeal whitworth. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Crescent, Dark
 • Categories: Guns, Laser, Missiles, warfare, Orc, Goblins, Trolls, Trollocs...
 • Inspirations: Video/Computer Game
 • Submitted: 2012-04-17 13:23:50
 • Views: 182

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