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"Wolfstone´s Journal - Calling All Heroes" by Timothy Pontious

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I'm still a little surprised since this is my first Mods Choice, and only my second item submitted to Elfwood. I want to thank everybody who stopped by with something kind to say! Every adventure starts out somewhere. This short intervention by a bard probably started a half dozen to say the least.
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Calling All Heroes
As recalled and written by Wolfstone in his journal sometime after


It started out in a nondescript inn near the harbor district of Point Merit - just an average midsummer evening. There was nothing that would have singled out this evening; the ale, bread, beef, and cards were the same as always. Even the salty breeze had the usually fishy taste. I had no inkling that the evening would turn inside out, or that it would be the hinge of my career.

That feeling evaporated when the doors to the Red Turtle Inn burst open as a bard strode purposefully into the common room. So sudden was his entry, and so confident and stern was his gait that conversations quieted. His face was flushed with barely-contained fire as he grabbed a chair to aid his leap to a table-top where he stood in the midst of the room.

His office was evident, as he wore sumptuous robes (though travel-stained) and by his instrument strung carefully across his shoulder. The patrons of the inn began to applaud, thinking they were in for a concert, until it was obvious that he was not there for revelry. He motioned dramatically for quiet and attention to his words.

"Men and women of Port Merit, a fell day has dawned indeed;
The risk of it is all you've loved and your land's title deed.
For some Evil has found our homeland and upheaved the night,
Then cast it headlong toward us, with all its bloody might!

For something is amiss from Eaglebrook to the Foal Valley fields
To arms ye sons of Tirra, before the day sun yields!

I have heard the gates of Iron Deep the Pale Folk did defend,
As the dawn of eternal night determined to make their end.
When legions of skeleton warriors, hungered by an evil fire,
Pulled down brave warriors from their wall in treachery conspired.

The nomads of the Winter Plains no longer have their homes,
Their songs for now unsung.
Those plains trod under by an army of undead bones,
That has put them on the run!

For something is amiss from Anvil Hills to Trinsta's Cleft.
To arms ye sons of Tirra, ere your kinsmen be bereft!

And not only from the West is the peril great,
As I surmise you have not heard?
Perhaps you know the herdsmen's fate?
Of the monsters they have endured?

Have you noticed any of the King's Rangers today?
All away to Eaglebrook, the Cleft and the Highlands.
And why do they urgently scout so far away?
There is Evil afoot, and these are no mere brigands!

So get off your sotted stools, ye sons of Alliance arise!
Bows and swords and axes take, and bring your skill to bear;
Because our cause of light and life is despised,
And an evil day is near.

Ye heroes, sons and daughters, my truth you've just now heard.
Find your courage now, I beg! These things are true, my word.
For something is amiss, Tirra's Teeth and far beyond.
To arms ye sons of Tirra, lest the Evil bids us gone!

The bard paused for only a short moment before he jumped down from the table and strode back to the door - and into the night. The urgency of his oratory had temporarily cut through the haze of ale and smoke, leaving many there stunned. There was a bit of applause from one drunken corner and some giggling from another, and soon the room had reverted to its familiar routine of ale, beef, and cards. After all, how seriously can you take a bard who does not even give his name?

But if you had been there and you were a careful observer, such as myself, you would have noted that several of the younger men and women (and some who had seen several more winters) paid for their uneaten dinner and quietly left the inn. Their purposeful moves and hushed expressions told of a resolve to aid Tirra in any way they could.

This is why, after I finished my ale, that I joined them.

←- A Visit (poem) | Conspiracy of the Dead - 01 -→

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2 Oct 2004:-) Glo 'the Bug' Bowden
Hi, I'm back again. This story has been weighing very much on my mind lately. Whenever I thought of it, a scripture from my church kept popping up into my mind, and I feel it very applicable to this story.

"Behold, there are many called, but few are chosen. And why are they not chosen? Because their hearts are set so much upon the things of this world..." (D&C 121: 34-35)

Every patron in that bar was called, and yet only the few chose to answer the call to serve. The rest are too blind to see or understand the meaning of the messanger.

Alright, I'm done being philosophical. Have a grand day!

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Well, I'll have to admit that I hadn't considered it in that light. Feel free to use it as an illustration of that if you'd like. 12"
5 Feb 2005:-) B. Layne Weaver
Ah, a Mod's so soon? *represses twinge of jealousy* 12 lol Congrats on the shiny gold star! I suppose I should have read this one first since it came before the other Wolfstone story. Anyway, I was so intrigued by the first that I scurried over here to read the other.

"Even the salty breeze had the usually fishy taste." *usual*

Quite a rousing speech that bard spun! Wee nitpick: you forgot the end quote at the end of that marvelous--and quite ominous-- bit of news.

**by the way, I apologize if I'm picking nits that have already been picked before, but I try not to read other people's comments until after I'm done reading/commenting... reduces the risk of running into a spoiler, you know. 12 **

Very nice! Oh, and can I hug you for including women? It was such a subtle yet wonderful detail. There's the damsel in distress, and there's the rogue warrior maiden-- and then there's this realistic middle that you have achieved. As I said, a subtle detail, but I noticed it.. and I loved it.

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Thanks for reading, and the hug. You can pick my nits any time. I have two quite different stories in the queue now, and working on a third WJ, so come back soon. 12"
25 Sep 2005:-) Smokeleopard
I'm finally getting around to repaying the favour for your comments on 'Bound'. Sorry it's taken so long...

I really enjoyed this story. From the poem you can tell you've got a world fleshed out there with all those great names and places (Iron Deep, Pale Folk, Anvil Hills and lets not leave out Trinsta's Cleft! Excellent!)
I like Wolfstone too. I love a good first-person story because you can get a good feel for the character very quickly. Even though the poem dominated much of the story, I like Wolfstone's kinda laidback voice. (No over-acting there!)

Can't wait to read more of Wolfstone (cool name too). And of course, congrats on the MC!!

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Thanks, Jeff - glad you liked it. Actually, the story kind of continues in the Dead War series, and I have a couple more chapters that will get posted soon. It's 3rd person, but that way you can see him from another POV. I think there are more journal fragments laying about too...."
29 Oct 2005:-) Keith D. Brooks Jr.
This tale reminds me of American history; how criers would go from town to town and hamlet to hamlet during the Revolutionary War and decrie the English, asking for any and all to join their cause for the freedom of the Americas. I liked the ending and congrats on the Mod's Choice! Well deserved. 2

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "I guess it is a little hard not to stand up and salute or something after you read this. I'm almost tempted to do a Starship Troopers version. We'll see. Thanks for your comments - I'll be back to your page very soon!"
23 Nov 2005:-) Matthew J. Hillary
Sweet. There was something I liked about this. I think that knowing that it goes into a story called Conspiracy of the Dead (and before it was Wars of the Dead?) really makes this much more intriguing. The bard's song was sweet. One of the rhymes seemed kind of plain, but overall it rocked and it was actually a surprise. I figured he was just gonna say what was up. Whatever. I'm off to dig into Conspiracy.

Ohh, I would recomend (as my one critique) you take out the word "that" in the last sentance "this is why that I joined them" ???

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "I agree THAT I really hate THAT word. I convinced myself it needed to be there for reasons of meter, but the meter is kind of whacked anyway, so..... *shrug*. Welcome to my page. I should have some reading time over the Turkey Day weekend, and will repay your visit."
5 Jan 2006:-) Samuel V. R. Joseph
Hey there, this was a really nice idea... Well told, too! I like the idea of him writing in his journal what has happened, although it does seem to me that he's writing this after the fact -- that is to say, he's not writing the events that occur to him day by day, as a normal journal, but rather all at once, which would make it more of an autobiography than an actual journal. Well it just kinda seems that way to me, anyway =P

And one thing I'd like to point out:
"This is why, after I finished my ale, that I joined them." -- the "that" seems rather out of place here, how about just leaving it out?

That said, I like the way this is going... I'll have to move on to the next chapters as soon as I have time! Keep writing!

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Welcome to my page, and thanks for your kind comments, Samuel. This is really sort of the pivot point between the disconnected Journal entries and the Conspiracy of the Dead (which has short journal bits in it as well). Which means this is a little bit forced to fit both projects. Come back for a read when you can!"
19 Jan 200645 Christabel Nolan
this was very enjoyable. Quite unexpected, although in context, was the bard's poetic speech, a refreshing change from ... prose. ... ignore me. But it was good, and I shall read more.

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "I'm glad you found it enjoyable. It was the first I've tried to mix prose and poetry. Though I'm not sure how Wolfstone managed to remember all of it for his journal..... LOL"
4 Feb 2006:-) Matthew J. Hillary
Would moving your "that" fit your meter thing?

"This is why that after I finished my ale I joined them."

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "or, "This is why I downed my ale, and joined them." I'll fix it one of these days. o.0"
17 Feb 2006:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
If this was your first attempt at mixing prose and poetry, I commend you. I've always been too afraid to even attempt poetry, much less mixing them.

I'll be back to read more about Wolfstone as I'm intrigued.
You have an excellent knack for naming places.

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Welcome to my shelf! I'm trying to make this collection evocative of an actual place and time, as close as fantasy permits, so I'm glad my place names seem to fit. =D"
23 Mar 2006:-) Jessica Warner
Now that's a good recruitment policy. Any savvy King should take note of this, and hire a few bards to dramatically challenge people into national service.

What I really liked about this was the feel we got for your wide world throughout the bard's speech. Although the story's quite short, that made it feel really full, if you know what I mean...the description, whether in the song or the story gave a sense of immediacy, like I was there. Well deserved Mods, I'm gonna read some more!

:-) Timothy Pontious replies: "Aw shucks. Sounds like I accomplished my mission. Glad you liked this one. Read as much as you'd like - they're all the same price. =D"
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 • Created by: :-) Timothy Pontious
 • Copyright: ©Timothy Pontious. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Poem, Bard, War, Undead, Arms, Hero, Ranger, Wolfstone, Skeleton, Danger
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins, Celtic
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