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"The land of dreams and tales" by Natalie Touretsky (Gerie Aren)

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A raggy poem, depressive, as always, not much to say...:)

Land of dreams and tales

Passing by and going away,

Sunburn, windswept, barefooted and light…

- Where do you go, my girl, which way?

- To the land of dreams and tales I go tonight.

- The land of dreams and tales is long gone,

Dragons and unicorns have never been,

Magics and mysteries came undone,

Heroes left only on TV screen.

On she goes, between concrete walls.

Winds carry dust and in hollows sing,

Erasing her traces the darkness falls

And her shadow rises like wing…

Date	Name	Comment
7 Dec 2002	Anastasia I-Morn-Gwathren	Loading... Ah, very like you. Great poem. I would have liked to see it expanded a bit though. It's asking for it! At this kind of view of fantasy there's so much to say. Though I like the "fading" kind of effect in the end. Great. You haven't updated lately! pouts I did though, lol, finally. Natalie Touretsky (Gerie Aren) replies: "Well, it was longer in the begginig, but I deleted the girls answer. It's silly to argue with the statemet "there is NO such thing as unicorn/magic!". It's like talking to the wall. You can only leave the unbeliver to his unbeliving))) And I liked the "fading" end myself. Don't pout, there is update on the way (about 230 tickets left)! 2 new poems!"
26 Jun 2010	Michaela Smith	Loading... This is a fabulous poem !!

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'The land of dreams and tales':

• Created by:

Natalie Touretsky (Gerie Aren)
• Copyright: ©Natalie Touretsky (Gerie Aren). All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Dreams, Girl, Night
• Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
• Views: 297

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