| 27 Aug 2002 |  Michelle A. Davis |  Loading...Am I the first commenter? Cool! I've read Mercy and the Ayolida (sp?) stories because you sent to them to me a while back, of course. They're really good, and for your age its incredible that you can write so well. Be patient and more people will come by...it takes time for people to discover you. Keep up the good work.  Danielle Tribus Colman replies: "Nice to hear from you, Michiru. Come back soon and I'll get some more up, plus illustrations if I can manage it. Er, by the by, does your offer still stand to draw some of the characters from Ayolida? If so, I'll run off some descriptions for you, 'cause I'm having real trouble and I suspect you'll do a better job of it than me." | |
| 1 Sep 2002 |  Alice "Missing Enigma" Raven | Loading... Ack! Dani! *cries* why didn't you tell me you got your stories up! I've been trying for AGES to get onto them but it kept saying 'lost in the woods' ooh, your stories are great, i love the one about innocence *ok, so thats a poem...* but hey. yeah, thankyou for doing my pictures!!! Danielle Tribus Colman replies: "Possibly the reason you've been "lost in the woods" all this time is because I've only just got published. I've had a Wyverns account on the extranet for ages, but I've had a little trouble with html for a while, so I've been through the moderator queue two or three times. But I've got up now! Actually, even after I got published, I kept getting "lost in the woods" myself for ages. Here's what happened: I got an e-mail telling me that my stuff had met with the moderators' approval, so I connected to the internet at once and typed in the full URL - http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/libr/t/r/tribus - feeling SO proud that I could remember the whole thing. A moment later: "Lost in the Woods". I bit my lip and tried again. And again, and again. I was almost at the "call-the-computer-every-expletive-in-history" stage, when it hit me: tribus is my Lothlorien UID. My Wyverns UID is tribus2. I'd been typing the wrong URL the whole time!" | |
| 3 Sep 2002 | Michelle A. Davis | Loading... Yeah, my offer is still on the table. Send the descriptions on over to crucibledragon@hotmail.com and I'll see what I can do. Danielle Tribus Colman replies: "Thanks, Michiru." | |
| 14 Oct 2002 | A critic | Loading... Your work shows promise but you need to develop a sense of creativity because they all follow the same pattern. I think your writing is trying to imitate that of an adult but you aren't there yet and it comes across more immaturely Danielle Tribus Colman replies: "Really? How old d'ya think I am, then? You might be surprised. Oh, and "imitate an adult"? Well, thanks. Buy my book when it comes out." | |
| 4 Nov 2002 | Jonathan Williams | Loading... Hello. You been here long? I just joined today. My stories aren't up yet..... | |
| 10 Nov 2002 | Jonathan D. Williams | Loading... My stories are finally posted! YAY! I'm so happy...... | |
| 28 Nov 2002 | JC Penny | Loading... your work is O.k but as a professional i dont think you should give up the day job (or school). your earlier comment about buying your book, who would publish such ammature work. grow up then try writing something better. i have had 3 books published and its tough so maybe wait till you turn 13 then give it a go. | |
| 16 Jan 2003 | Alice 'Serpentine Fire' Raven | Loading... Muahahaha! Nice reply to the picky person above. Mreheeheee! I love this stuff!! *I will buy your book when it comes out* and I have artses up in loth, hear me squeak! | |
