| 4 Apr 2006 |  Windrider |  Loading...I loved the first two. They really held my attention. I'll print out the other two to read later.
Can't read off the screen. | |
| 8 Apr 2006 |  Dora D. Popova | Loading... wowo you're the first person whose work i read and i loved it. You certailny have a way with words  definately keep it up  Tina Huynh replies: "Thank you, Dora, for taking time off your busy schedule to come visit my lonely page =pGood luck with your studies and may your Muse never leave! ^^" | |
| 10 May 2006 | Kazuma | Loading... i'm sorry, I got bored. I really tried, I did. maybe I just need some japanese fight scenes? | |
| 4 Jun 2006 | Atro | Loading... Very vivid imagery. It flowed almost melodically, and that's very rare indeed. You seemed to lose a bit of it later on, though... the first three stories seemed to have a much clearer and explicit description than the last one.
Nice pace. It's fast enough to progress the storyline and I like how you put the whole plot in terms of little (semi) everyday events, not going as far as you could've with the descriptive part. Perhaps a little more action?
Overall great work, I'd like to see how the two parts link together ^^ | |
| 8 Jan 2008 | Loreya | Loading... Ahoy! I see a dust ball going across! Hope to see more stuff soon... | |
| 28 Nov 2008 | Icewhine | Loading... Wait - what happened? Where’s teh rest? Digging through old bookmarks. | |
Tina Huynh / Writings
