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Matthew Scott Jernstadt

"A.I." by Matthew Scott Jernstadt

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About the harshness of being an artificially intelligent cyborg
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Created only to obey,
I am.

Built to create and destroy alike,
I am.

Never to be worthy of rights,
I am.

Not equal in the eyes of men,
I am.

Programmed to think for myself,
I am.

Programmed to accept I have no free will,
I will not.
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1 Jul 200345 Angelic_eyez <smellybell
***looks around*** no comments??? ***does the first comment dance*** this is a very good piece, its a short,snappy get to the point poem, it also shows us how a real cyborg could feel if they could. I really love your writing!
2 Jul 2003:-) Esmeralda Eli
I love all your poem! I love the way you presented this one! Also, the subject it's very interesting and very unique! I love it! I hope to read more!
6 Jul 200345 Maggie
This is a very unique form of poem and it's entrancing to the ear. I hope to hear other wokrs of yours. keep up the outstanding job!
18 Jul 2003:-) Emily McDurman
Powerful, entracng, elegant, and beautiful poem. I like the power that's embedded into this; very strong.
10 Aug 200345 Miguel Francis Ettema
Nice poem, pity it isn't strictly original. But, kudos none the less.
27 Dec 2003:-) Gordon I Mckenna
3 rules of roboting arnt brocken tecneically so iccant make my usual point of "When will they learn?", but still... Nice aand short, enough to be thought provocking...
24 Jun 2008:-) The only rtr5
It is a very nice piece of work.The poem really emphasizes on the feelings of the robot/cyborg the way they would.
3 Mar 200945 Arc
wow. i love this poem. it so totally like how I would write a story about living machines.... I have a question though... aren’t cyborgs a man/machine hybrid???
3 Mar 200945 Arc
not trying to be critical at all, just curious on your point of view.
14 Apr 200945 Griffon
You make me wanna cry (almost heh) its beutiful
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About 'A.I.':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Matthew Scott Jernstadt
 • Copyright: ©Matthew Scott Jernstadt. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Artificial, Intelligence
 • Categories: A.I. (Artificial Intelligence), Robots, Androids, Humanoid Warmachines
 • Views: 1070


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