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Matthew Scott Jernstadt

"A Vampire´s Sorrow" by Matthew Scott Jernstadt

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A insight into the thoughts of a vampire.
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A dark gift has been forced upon me,
Cursed to forever walk at night.

Never again will I know the warmth of the sun,
Never again to fear my own mortality.

A creature born of death,
A corpse forever craving life.

I must kill to survive,
Forever cringing at the taste of the blood I must take.

My pain growing with every life I steal,
A child of Hell I have become.

This is my curse,
This is my sorrow.
←- The Being of the Vampire | A.I. -→

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6 Jul 200345 Maggie
now this is a truly wonderful REAL poem! You have great word usage and it's very colorful. I'm taken back by the few comments on this poem. This poem is one that comes frome a writers very soul and i fuly enjoy it. You have true talent!
6 Jul 200345 Lady Deathstrike
WOW! This is one of the greatest poems I have ever read! OMG! This is just amazing! It's so deep, and it really gives you the feeling of a real vampire, damned to spend eternity killing the innocent. Well, keep writing, this is great!
8 Sep 200345 Queen Ellesime
*whispers to person beside her*
Maybe he's a vampire. Maybe that would explain how he's so good...
12 Sep 200345 Anonymous
Beautiful. I'm not sure of your intent in writing this poem but it made me feel...
I'm not good with words, but 'touched', I guess.
The language was fairly simplistic, but you painted such a picture!
Congratulations and good luck, you have a gift
1 Jul 2008:-) Anna Moonfrost Grawe
Who............ Deep(thats me with no words to speak)
14 Apr 200945 Griffon
slick writing dude you could make a killing (heh heh)
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About 'A Vampire's Sorrow':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Matthew Scott Jernstadt
 • Copyright: ©Matthew Scott Jernstadt. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Vampire, Emotions
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders...
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