| 1 Jul 2009 |  Nicholas C Turner |  Loading...CHAPTER 1 IS FINALLY UP!!!
I’ve proofread this document several times, so it should be free of errors, though if you spot a mistake, PLEASE let me know. Like I said in my porfile, I’m an incorrigable pefectionisnt...hehehe. | |
| 1 Jul 2009 |  Heidi Hecht | Loading... Hi, I just finished Chapter 1 & left my comment. Nice to see another sci-fi writer around. We are outnumbered by the fantasy writers around here. | |
| 12 Jul 2009 |  Jill O Connell | Loading... cool your like me you want to publish a book too!
you probably have a better mind for it though I will give your ch1 a read but in return you have to read mine (:
okay? | |
| 13 Jul 2009 | Nicholas C Turner | Loading... Thanks for the comments so far guys 
Chapter 2 has been submitted for moderation and will hopefully be posted soon. I’m currently working on Chapter 3. | |
| 15 Jul 2009 | Nicholas C Turner | Loading... Chapter 2 has been approved and posted. Enjoy 
Once again, let me know if you find any errors. For some reason, there were at least two instances in Ch 2 where apostrophes were replaced by quotation marks whenever I opened the document on Elfwood via the "Modify" button. I fixed them, but there might be others. | |
| 22 Jul 2009 | Nicholas C Turner | Loading... Chapter 3 should be ready for uploading soon. Just a little bit more proofreading to do.
Small edit to Chapter 2:
[SLIGHT SPOILER]
I decided to give the verdrak pointed finger/toenails instead of talons. While I wanted them to have "claws" so that they’d have a slightly feral feel to them, I couldn’t help thinking that reptilian talons would make it difficult for a verdrak to make a fist without hurting itself. You’ll find out why that’s relevant in the 4th chapter (though some of the more clever readers might figure it out after Ch. 3) | |
| 30 Jul 2009 | Nicholas C Turner | Loading... Chapter 3 has been uploaded and is awaiting review by a moderator. | |
| 7 Aug 2009 | Nicholas C Turner | Loading... Chapter 3 has been approved! As always, report any errors you come across. There shouldn’t be any seeing as how I read through this chapter almost a dozen times, but there’s still a chance I missed something. After all, I’m only human...
Now beginning work on Chapter 4 (mostly editing). | |
| 9 Aug 2009 |  Fredrik K T Andersson | Loading... Thanks for the comment and support! Nicholas C Turner replies: "No problem
Look at it this way; if folks are bugging you to hurry up with your work, it just means they’re hooked! Hopefully I’ll get that kind of attention some day. So far, the only annoying comments I’ve gotten are from spammers posting personal ads  " | |
| 13 Aug 2009 |  Selena Lilly Mead | Loading... What other songs do you like by Avril Lavigne? Nickelback? 3 Doors Down? Drowning Pool? What kind of stories do you write? because i am a writer and published author.  Nicholas C Turner replies: "To be honest, those are the only songs by those artists I know off the top of my head.
As for what kind of stories I write, what you see here is what I got. I haven’t worked on anything else...well except for a crudely drawn comic series I did when I was little. The story I’m posting here actually evolved from the basic idea behind that comic, though a LOT has changed since those early stages." | |
