This will be a long post, so settle yourself in your seat.
Ignore my "uppity" wording. I am a walking dictionary and I try to be like my brother who is, seemingly, perfect. *ROFL*
First: "Escape" in particular, I notice, is grossly elongated. Most of your others are, too. I shall assume it was meant that way. If not . . . then yes, "trying" is the key word there. ~_^
Second: All of your characters' arms are too short. If you are attempting to make your characters proportionate, the hands should reach mid-thigh. In my opinion, the hands should, when spread fully, look slightly smaller than the face is tall. Again, these two only work IF you are being proportionate.
I, a mere twelve-year-old, ought to follow my own advice. And start telling people that I have less than a month to go before I'm thirteen! I hope this has been vaguely informative. If you want more information, read the section in Fantasy Art Resource Project (FARP), a link to which can be found at the Elfwood Home Page. If you haven't been there, it's got a lot of information, and is really helpful, way more so than small, insignificant me. LOL!
Have fun! And don't be discouraged. Ever. Or you might stop drawing. And that would be torture for you, because then what would you do when you needed to be creative?
LOL! I am getting sidetracked. Again. Well, do check out FARP. Drawing is great fun, once you get the hang of it.
Brother Quote of the Day: Happy Happy Fun Fun!
Vallicity A. Wilson replies:
"Of course I promise not to be discouraged after all that "