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"Acceptance (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

SciFi/Fantasy text 1 out of 37 by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. ←Previous - Next→

This is a poem I thought of when I was thinking about what could possibly happen in my story. I guess you could say I got a little side tracked.

←- Wolf (Poem) | Alone Without Evidence -→

As his teeth begin to slip in
Piercing underneath my skin
He begins to drink my soul
As my thoughts he’ll control
Clearing, mind melding as I slip away
No longer will I see the light of day
He forces me to drink
I, still fighting, recoil and shrink
Puts his wrist to my mouth
The blood moves through and south
The change takes over me
No longer am I held by mortality
I have an eternity ahead
My thoughts remain on death instead
Murderous huntress throughout the night
Disappears at the first sign of light
Forced to hunt and live for the kill
Night after night watching the blood spill
Will find for prey anyone who looks like him
Rip that poor man limb from limb
Not for food but for payback
So if you’re hair is almost black
And you appear muscularly trim
You might just remind me of him
The Vampire that turned a scared lady
Long ago, a century or three
Into the murderous thing she is today
I may whisper haven’t you anything to say
When you remind me of him
So fit and trim
Feel that chill run your spine
Now you know that you are mine

←- Wolf (Poem) | Alone Without Evidence -→

Date	Name	Comment
29 Oct 2003	Nonny	Loading... WOW, that is EXCELLENT. O_O I really like the story in it. I don't see how the title fits the poem, though; she's not accepted anything, her 'maker' took rather than accepted, and by design her victims accept nothing either. Unless he tricked her into wanting the change, but she realized the truth too late... speculation aside, this is a really, really awesome work! Mucho applause to you! Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks sooo much for the comment... I chose the title Acceptance because in my mind the way she accepted her fate was revenge. Speculation is always allowed. thats for the compliment i feel so special. ok I'm finished. "
4 Nov 2003	Cat	Loading... Hey, Vicki this was great I especially liked the lines "Murderous huntress throughout the night Disappears at the first sign of light", I loved the poem it gave me chills. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Cat sitting in a cold room again... o0o you say it's my poems fault... Yay!! i mean... YAY!!! lol i'm glad you love it... thanx for commenting"
4 Nov 2003	Yuki Erika Radcliffe	Loading... Wow. Revenge can be a powerful thing, yes? I'm glad i don't look like him. I really liked this poem a lot. I'm not even a great vampire fan, but this was just amazing. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "True true... Revenge is mighty powerful... i'm glad you like it. Thanks... Thanks for commenting "
26 Dec 2003	Elvis	Loading... I loved how this vengeful character if reminded of the one who changed her would "Rip that poor man limb from limb." Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks Elvis I'm glad u liked it! Thanks for commenting!"
23 Jan 2004	Ultima Psyco Macias2006@hot...com>	Loading... Kannichiwa....This is some awesome poetry...Keep it up sweetheart! Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Danke... I'm glad you like. and I will. thanks for commenting."
24 Sep 2004	C w Rowling	Loading... Awesome, your so good with words, im jelous steals your talent and runs away and hides for a monment, feels guitly and slumps over to give it back.... Can i borrow it though? I need to write something for my boyfriend. sigh ohwel, a little off track arent i? Well anyhow, again amazing i love it! Well done. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "hehe, I don't often have people ask to borrow my talent. Normally I threaten to beat up and steal people's talents. haha. I'm very pleased you enjoyed this. Good luck with writing for your boyfriend. And thank you very much for commenting."
1 Sep 2005	Angela E. Knopp	Loading... hehe I like it!!! jumps up and down I have nothing useful to say at all. showers you with dark red roses go you! is maybe a little bit to hyper Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: " Haha! Yay Dark roses! thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoy it. And Thank you very much for commenting"