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"Angelic Fall (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

SciFi/Fantasy text 3 out of 37 by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. ←Previous - Next→

This is something I wrote just thinking. I'm beginning to think I think too much. I hope you enjoy.

←- Alone Without Evidence | Animal Escape (Poem) -→

Once fallen, stuck, trapped below
No longer the heavens which were long ago
Clipped wings, Angels bleed
The heavenly world no longer takes the lead
Fallen Angels, blood drips down like tears
Eyes reddened, a reality of fears
Below the clouds in which they flew
Their angelic world askew
Rain drops on the winged beast
On angelic blood continues the feast
Confined to the mortal lair
Though Angels shouldn’t know despair
Without wings no graceful flight
Trapped in an eternity of a beast filled night
No longer will clouds and light be their abode
No longer will they know the celestial road
Bleeding from clipped wings
Seeing the sorrow humanity brings
Unintentional demonic drop
All belongs to one accidental chop
Lost without the angelic living
And their wings seem unforgiving
No return to their angelic existence
Each attempt swells the distance
The beast continues to feed on their blood
While Angels wallow in beastly mud
The stars no longer light their way
Where angelic white was now is gray
Clipped wings, they remain trapped
To their beastly world they must adapt
One by one lost to the beast
One by one added to his feast
This beast that feeds on the angelic way
This beast that continues everyday
This beast is without sanity
This beast, this beast is all humanity

←- Alone Without Evidence | Animal Escape (Poem) -→

Date	Name	Comment
26 Dec 2003	Elvis	Loading... You say you think too much, but really I think these works of yours are great to read. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks Soo Much! I feel special! i'm glad u think they're great to read! Thanks for commenting!"
17 May 2004	Tasha-Ann N. Torres	Loading... If you think too much I absolutely love your thinking! That was amazing and oh so gruesome but still very nice. I like it a lot. For some reason, even though I am human (or maybe I'm not) I hate humanity..I have no idea why though. Maybe because of all the cruel people out there but then again there are people like you who so wonderfully portray things unknown. Very well done! Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "oOo thank you soo much! I'm glad you love it so much. Humanity can be rather gruesome sometimes. Last I checked I might be human but I still see unknown. I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for the wonderful comment!"
24 Sep 2004	C w Rowling	Loading... hey Vix, i know the thinking to much feeling all too well! but you do so well as expressing the thoughts. even though i am human (last time i checked) i do hate humanity for many reasons i shall not go down that road at this moment or ill be here for a while. i just wanted to say you portrayed your thoughts well, i think this is one of your best (or maybe its just one that i like best) great job. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Hey, yeah that feeling has its way of just tugging at you, doesn't it? Humanity has its own little way of giving people good reason to hate it even though they belong to the race. I'm pleased you like the way I portray my thoughts. Thank you for the very nice comment."
13 Feb 2007	Becca Bit	Loading... I know how you feel about thinking so much. Once I thought to much and was sent to the emergency room. KIDDING! This poem is awsome! It flows so easily! When I read it, I can see a picture in my head... and it's bloody. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks bunches. I'm glad you enjoyed the picture I created. Keep reading! Thanks for the commment! "