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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"Be Free (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is a poem I began in Psych and finished at home. It's about a demon. Have fun reading.
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Her eyes glowed amazingly ruby red
Her appearance filled them with dread
Fangs hung down past her chin
And sent chills underneath their skin
As she spoke she hypnotized
Drawing them forth mesmerized
Drawing them to their death
Telling them to enjoy their last breath
Her demonic visage in the darkest night
Appeared that of a damsel living in fright
A demon knowing unlimited time
Took a moment to commit every crime
Lured to death all who might come to her aid
Her sympathies just couldn’t be swayed
Always she played the damsel in distress
She waited to die, to make a final address
No one knew of her hellish reality
Or how the demon affected her mentality
As the town folk began to wonder
About the demon who pulled the caring under
She left a note to any and all
‘You in your town, you who I appall
You have yet to come and end my misery
Thus I send this final plea
I have killed and maimed many of your kin
Much of it I did with a gleeful grin
Now I beg of you to find
And end the demon in my mind
Free me from this eternal agony
And allow me to be once again free’

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18 Jul 2004:-) Artemis Heart
*first comment dance* That was a good poem, the description of the demon was good. I really liked it, particularly her note to the towns people it ended on a powerful note.

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "  I do enjoy those first comment dances! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and I'm pleased you enjoyed her note to the towns folk. Thank you for your comment."
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'Be Free (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Demonic, Killing, Wish
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 288

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