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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"Bewitching Revenge (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is yet another poem I wrote, some during calc some sitting at home bored. It's about a witch who was changed into a vampire. I hope you enjoy it.
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Death took her long before her time
Now she’ll punish him for this crime
Bitten, taken, becoming among the undead
Away from death to a new life she was led
This wasn’t the life she wanted
Constantly by death she was haunted
Even though she would live eternally
The light of day, she would no longer see
She wished to go back to when she was turned
The night before she was condemned to be burned
Witch hunts caught and convicted her
Her quick trial, memories were all a blur
Haunted by her memory
All the fire, blood and death she’s had to see
Four hundred years of this devilish life
Running in fear, running from strife
Cursing him as he cursed her
In his eternal life she would cause her stir
He’d think twice before
He ever attempts to turn more

That night he had come to her cell
And in that moment she fell
She didn’t answer automatically
She didn’t think over what he could be
Tried as a witch now she’s a night child
By her magic all are beguiled
Her spells amount to misery
Torment throughout his immortality
She’s planned her retribution
She won’t be the cause of his execution
She hopes to see him suffer for what he’s done
Maybe he’ll walk himself out to greet the sun
Ending his life would make her like him
As much as she wished to tear him limb from limb
She wouldn’t become among his kind
She forced herself to remain confined
She wouldn’t allow happiness in immortality
Not for herself and certainly not for her enemy

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11 Nov 2003:-) Kelly M. Schaeffer
Oops forgot to say! Keep 'em coming! You know they rock!

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "hehe... you know I will Keep them coming... i don't always know they rock it's always nice to know u think they rock... 2 Thanks For commenting"
11 Nov 200345 Kelly M. Schaeffer
ooo i like! Very interesting... a witch getting turned. Could be a powerful combo...

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "lol yup... an interesting combo... even more interesting if the witch is bent on revenge... 2 thanks for commenting!"
26 Dec 200345 Elvis
I like this one a lot!!! A witch being turned would actually be cool to write about.

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Yeah i thought so too! thats why i started the poem i may make a story but i like that poem and i'm glad you do to! Thanks for commenting!2"
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'Bewitching Revenge (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Cursed, Revenge, Suffer, Vampire, Witch
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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