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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"Damage (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is something I wrote in Psych and English. Its about the need to feel safe and how destructive fear is and can be. I Hope you like it.
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Winds of time blew through the darkened age
Lit the way, torches flickered and burned with rage
Angry mob, shouts piercing the night
The angry mob looking for one kill, one fight
Protect their young from demonic forces
Destroy, kill all the demonic sources
Anyone who would wish to turn
They now allow them into the fire, to burn
Witches, Demons, Vampires even humans alike
Killing all they thought might strike
No longer waiting for an attack
Unusually following their ancestor’s track
Watching as another innocent burns
Find truth after the mistake that’s how one learns
No longer can the true ones watch this pain
No longer their true selves could they contain
Witches, Demons, Vampires fight
In one attempt to regain their night
Fighting once side by side
Of one night the demonic world had no divide
The humans lost as the wind blew out the fire
The human body count grew ever higher
Vampires fed off those who killed their own
Each demonic practice, no one would condone
Demons turned quite a few
Who looked upon their world anew
These new demons saw they were wrong
Demonic auras are mighty strong
Seeing how they’d killed so many
Not selectively, killing all and any
Demonic minds created this pain
And thoughts no one dared contain
For in this humans were blind
And killed off half of their own kind
The other half saw the world anew
Suddenly saw the damage people could do
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18 Dec 200345 Ebony Skull
Nice poem ("Does first comment dance")its very interesting!

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Yay! Another first comment dance! 2 Thank you! i worked kinda hard on it... not really... but yeah Thanks for commenting!"
18 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
Oooooooooh. Koolies! ^_^ Very interesting poem. Yeps. I like it a lot! Good job! ^_^ By the way I love the demon theme.

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "oOo Thank you! I'm glad you like this poem and the theme. Thank you for commenting!"
30 Jun 200945 Anon.
the theme is very dark and very vivid in my mind.
30 Jun 200945 Anon.
i like it
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'Damage (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Changes, Demons, Fear, Fights, Humans, Vampires, Witches
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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