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"Hatred (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This its a poem i wrote while i was supposed to be paying attention in my psych and english classes. it only took a short time but i started at the end of the psych class and 5 min of english. Well I hope you enjoy.

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If and after see the way
See the path but turn to stay
Witches force the path in front of me
On my path to immortality
Death had gripped me, life snatched me back
Until my eternal life does crack
Send me to my willing grave
To end this curse is all I crave
Cursed by witches to live this life
Not those witches that cause my strife
Forced to be a childe of the night
Killing all who begin to fight
Drawing blood to sustain my immortal pain
The curse’s thirst I can’t contain
The pain forces me to kill
And drink until I have my fill
I hate my immortal existence
As I have ever since
I entered this painful curse
Watching the passing hearse
Another of my truly dead
On which I have fed
Waiting for a hunter of my kind
The end to my immortal life I can’t find
Maybe I’ll ignore the thirst
For three hundred years I have been cursed
I haven’t been able to end my pain
And my life which I disdain
To end this life this lack of living
Constantly taking never giving
Once more I wish to see the light
To end my eternal night

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Date	Name	Comment
4 Nov 2003	Crimson,master of the Flame	Loading... where is everyone!Am i just the only person who likes poems or something?this is very good,i can understand why the vampire is so sad.Tis a cruel way to live indeed... CHOW! 0 0 ( '.' ) Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks for commenting... i like poems... but them again thats probably why i write them. I'm glad you like it. thanks."
23 Jan 2004	Ultima Psyco Macias2006@hot...com>	Loading... Hey...That was good...I really liked it...Email me back on how u were inspired to write that and such...Macias2006@hotmail.Com...Thx Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Hey, I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure how it came to me; I was just thinking about what might run through the mind of a Vampire cursed. Thanks for commenting, it's great to know my work is liked. And Comments are muchly appreciated."
18 Feb 2004	Anonymous	Loading... I like this poem. It is creative and well thought out. It gives you a picture that you would naver have thought was there. The artist of the poem gets much deserved love. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you! i'm glad you like this. o0o love yay!! Thank you for commenting!"
18 Sep 2004	C w Rowling	Loading... ok third comment on ur poems, but they are all jus awesome. i love vampires to death. you really have done well with this, (argh i cant find the words to say wot i wana say, maybe thats why a draw and dont write...) wow, thats all i can come up with, jus WOW! once again inspired! Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Wow, thank you for the wonderful comment. I'm a big fan of vampires as well. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. And I'm especially pleased you found it inspiring. Thank you again for the comment. "
4 Oct 2009	Cute	Loading... more about hatred poem’s okay