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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"Love and Hate (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is something I wrote in study Hall. Putting it simply or in Kelly's words 'love ain't always pretty' remind me to thank Kelly. :) well I hope you like it.
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Once more he drew to attack
She turned to fight but drew back
Prince and princess were at war
Unlike one that has ever happened before
Demon prince against Vampire princess
Their life had become loveless
Fighting out their bitter differences
Her life had become all his
Hating that he’d taken her land
They no longer walked hand in hand
His demonic world had become far too black
As she planned her next fatal attack
More and more their hatred grew
It out lived all but a few
Even with all the death their war continued
The world was engulfed in their feud
Vampires fed throughout the nights
Preparing for the worst of all fights
After this fight he’ll succumb
Hope for feeling, without her he’s numb
Now they swear their life is fate
There’s a thin line between love and hate
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5 Nov 200345 Fiiona Johnson
I don't get it'.'?sounds good though.
()()
=''=*meow*

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "In my mind it's that they were in love but they hated each other and when he gave in and gave her land back they were in love again... possibly... lol I'm not even sure... 2 i'm glad you think it sounds good ... Thanks for commenting"
23 Jan 200445 Ultima Psyco Macias2006@hot...com>
Hey...Im becomming a fan...U have excellent writing...Um..Ya..Cool...Email back

2 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you. and much thanks for commenting."
2 Jul 2004:-) Conway
Wow, I have finally found a mature, dark poem that rhymes without sounding childish. My congratulations. Really. I am floored.

2 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "  Wow. Thank you. I'm flattered. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and many thanks for such a nice comment. "
25 Jul 200545 Gray soul
Sounds like my conscience

2 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "It does have that feel, doesn't it? Thank you for commenting."
10 Feb 200845 Aja
nice. there is a very thin line between love and hate.

:-) Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you for commenting. Yes a thin thin line, sometimes it’s hard to distinguish between loathing and love as I’ve heard some say. Thank you again for your comment!"
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'Love and Hate (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Demon, Hate, Love, Prince, Princess, Vampire, Warfare
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Romance, Emotion, Love, Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 916

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