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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"Night Again (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is just a little something. Well maybe not little. But anyway, It's about a Guy and his planning plotting way... or is it? ok just kidding... but read on. I hope you enjoy it. :)
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Once again his fears create
His dream of her, his fate
As he watches, she feeds
He swears she is all he needs
He wants to be among her kind
Freely willing to bind
He wants to be with her
He knows their fate is to cause a stir
He approaches to beg the transformation
Begs for his annihilation
Will she turn him, make injustice right
Will she correct him; make him a childe of the night
Remembering before he was human, his past
Remembering the feel of the kill, his last
He only wished to be a night dweller again
He wondered if she’d hear his plea, wondered if she’d listen
Once already he’d chosen to transform
Chosen to become the accepted norm
He no longer wanted that life
He could no longer deal with that strife
He hoped to be a changed man
With that thought he’ll do all he can
To become a creature of the night
She was the answer to his horrid plight
If she turned him, made him her kind
No longer to this mortal life would he be confined
He only wished to be with her
And nothing would deter
If she wouldn’t change him, he’d find a way
He no longer wanted to live another day
His planned to be a childe of the night
And he would become one tonight
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23 Jan 200445 Ultima Psyco Macias2006@hot...com>
Hey wats up..Me again..Haha....U have me hooked so far..So keep up the good work..

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Hey. I'm glad I have you hooked. 2 Makes me feel special! 2 Thanks muchly for commenting!"
17 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
Very nice! Such determination just for love. Its seems so realistic. Keep it up!

3 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you. I plan to keep it up! Thanks again!"
10 Dec 2004:-) Jschmidt2
Nice poem. There's just one thing that caught my eye/ear. Some of the rhyming sentences are not the same length. It makes the poem a bit unbalanced.
Apart from that, good job.

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "  Thank you. I'll keep that in mind and work on my measure. Again thanks for the commenting. Your advice will come in handy. "
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'Night Again (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Choice, Fate, Plan, Vampire
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 332

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