| 23 Jan 2004 | Ultima Psyco Macias2006@hot...com> | Loading...Hey wats up..Me again..Haha....U have me hooked so far..So keep up the good work.. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Hey. I'm glad I have you hooked. Makes me feel special! Thanks muchly for commenting!" | |
| 17 May 2004 | Tasha-Ann N. Torres | Loading...Very nice! Such determination just for love. Its seems so realistic. Keep it up! Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you. I plan to keep it up! Thanks again!" | |
| 10 Dec 2004 | Jschmidt2 | Loading...Nice poem. There's just one thing that caught my eye/ear. Some of the rhyming sentences are not the same length. It makes the poem a bit unbalanced. Apart from that, good job. Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: " Thank you. I'll keep that in mind and work on my measure. Again thanks for the commenting. Your advice will come in handy. " | |