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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"The Demon (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is a poem about a halfling, Human and demon. The halfling is trying to decide between the evil demon side or the good human side.
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Look now the void opens for me
To steal from me my immortality
The demon I was before
Comes back craving even more
The demon begs for the blood
For me to swim in the crimson flood
To chew upon the elfish flesh
Wish my rampage to refresh
Become the evil I lived for
Choose that side once more
The hand I gripped on the side of good
Wants me to do what I never could
Give up that part of me
Escape back to mortality
Once again live the human side
Instead of slipping through the divide
Evil or not I will never kill
Never again willing to feel that thrill
The demon pushes evil and crime
Seems lives are running out of time
Choose the side of good to protect all
Slip through the cracks I fall
Welcome witches make the choice for me
Suddenly I don’t have an eternity
That friend whose hand I gripped
By evil’s hand that blood dripped
Now only vengeance, do I seek
That demon made my human world bleak
No human understands the struggle for good
Or that you’ll lose giving all you could
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15 Dec 200345 Jesus Freak
Hmmmmmm. Hmmmmmm. Hmmmmmmm....

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "hehe... i like that reaction... and i think i'll take those as good Hmmmmmms... thanks for commenting! 2"
23 Feb 200445 Darkphoenix7780
You have good flow. I like it.

:-) Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "o0o Yay!!! I'm glad you like it. Thanks muchly for commenting!"
9 Jan 200545 Bob
Kinda sounds like cole(from charmed)

:-) Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "ummm... ok. Thanks. I think."
25 Jul 200545 Gray soul
BOB is right but it sounds like this person is female so its more like Pheobe when she went a little evil

29 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Yay evil! Thank you for commenting."
25 Jul 200845 Sam
i like this! and the truth is this is me and i imagine my life with this poem...your great please give some poem...thans!!!
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'The Demon (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Choice, Craft, Demon, Halfling, Human
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 358

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