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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"The Meal (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is a poem I wrote in english class while thinking of my friend Kelly's dragon drawing. I'm rather pleased with it. I hope you like it.
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←- The Demon (Poem) | The Ritual Chapter 2 -→
Hissing snarling the dragon bit
Leaving fire only to burn it
Smoke beads through his nose
As they attempt their overthrows
The growing smoke hypnotizes
The swirling fire mesmerizes
Dragon shot out his fire
His hellish flames grew higher
All the men fit to fight
Came out to take over this night
Pointed ears hear shrill screams
As the dragon took over their dreams
This night lasts a nightmare
For all those who suffered there
The dragon fed upon the world
Hypnotizing with smoke that swirled
The magical world fed his need
On the boiling blood he continued to feed
After each bloody kill
The dragon grunted and laughed at their skill
No one could counter his attack
Each round that followed all drew back
The dragon had won the world was his meal
To the masses it didn’t seem real
Standing high on his pointed stone
Looked down at death and felt very alone
←- The Demon (Poem) | The Ritual Chapter 2 -→

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29 Oct 2003:-) Kelly M. Schaeffer
Woo! Vix you know I love it! I'm so honored that you did this with my lame drawing in mind (which I intend to redo now thanks to you!).
!kcor uoy

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "  Hey Kelly, your dragon isn't lame it's awesome... if it wasn't awesome it wouldn't have inspired me so HA... i'm glad you like it... thanx for commenting... !!!oot kcor uoy"
2 Nov 200345 Cat
Hey Vicki, I really like this one!(almost as much as I like ice-breakers)

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Hey Cat... i'm glad you like it... lol... i have bruises from Icebreakers just like you... hehe thanks for commenting. "
5 Nov 200345 Fiiona Johnson
Me likes^-^
()()
=''=*meow*

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "I'm glad you like... 2 Thanks for commenting"
26 Jan 2004:-) Vanessa Nunes
Really good poem, in my opinion it describes a dragon perfectly

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Yay! Danke! I'm very glad it describes a dragon perfectly!!! Thanks muchly! Your comment is appreciated!"
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'The Meal (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Defeat, Dragons, Fighting, World
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Fights, Duels, Battles, Romance, Emotion, Love
 • Views: 477

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