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Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

"The War (Poem)" by Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead

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This is something I wrote in Psych and english. It's about a war... I'm betting you guessed that by the title. well to know more you're just going to ahve to read. I hope you like it. :)
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←- The Ritual Chapter 2 | Tricky Demons (Poem) -→
The blood drips, crimson rain
After the demons brought their pain
The war between demon and vampire
One remark lit this fire
Once again the world’s in two
Wondering what the vampires will do
Will they attack, will they retaliate
How will they express their hate
One more body thrown upon the funeral pyre
As the amount each side loses, rises higher
As both sides react to each attack
They plan their up coming pay back
More death with each fight
Blood shows more with the first sign of light
Light shows down during the crimson rain
Each dying face expresses such pain
Demons and vampires alike
Each knows how and when to strike
Each fight bloodier than the first
Each escalation is the worst
The war continues more and more to die
From each death resounds a mournful battle cry
Both sides consider a truce
All the promises of peace seduce
Each side drawn farther from war
Wishing to see blood and death no more
Peace talks begin again
Each side told specifically to listen
Every remark was taken in stride
Both sides attempted to bury their pride
Listening to ideas to stop the blood
To stop the crimson rain that has become a flood
Never agreeing they won’t give in
Both demons and vampires want to win
Mediators know both sides are strong
But demons and vampires will never get along
←- The Ritual Chapter 2 | Tricky Demons (Poem) -→

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5 Dec 200345 Littlefirefaery
I just love your work but this wow its like you've lived it brilliant keep it up.

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I was trying to make it felt and apparently i was successful... 2Thanks for commenting! "
18 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
I love how you put the descriptions. Its so vivid in my mind and after I'm done it leaves a never-ending impression. Love it!

1 Victoria G. 'Vix' Olmstead replies: "Thank you. I'm glad you like my imagery, and descriptions. The lasting impressions i was going for worked i'm so happy!!!! Thank you lots for commenting!!!"
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'The War (Poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead
 • Copyright: ©Victoria G. ´Vix´ Olmstead. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Agreeance, Battle, Death, Demons, Vampires, War
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 385

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