Kool webpage...still not finish readng the story yet but I will be soon. I bet you'll have a book published one day man.

i agree with LonelyDmn that you might have a book out!

Adam,

It doesn't look as though you've added anything in a while, and you really should. Summertime is optimum creative time, so don't squander it on stuff you won't remember tomorrow.

To comment on your essay in class: you have learned an important lesson that I didn't learn until college. The world is full of the same types of people, so please don't think your high school is unique in playing host to, what did you call them? Empty shells? Even YOU are part of a type-set group, whether or not you realize it. Try your best to be just YOU...college and the real world hold more of the same, but it's not all that bad. 75% of what you learn in school has absolutely nothing to do with what you learn in class. It's true (college, the ratio is about 90 to 10).

That said, your English classes over the next 3 years WILL be very important to you in your career as a writer. Not only will you study some great works of literature, but you'll be given an opportunity to learn from the masters and pick up some helpful grammar hints. Yes, you may think that not knowing the direct object of a sentence is not that big of a deal; when you're a writer, it IS a big deal. Your audience expects excellence, and it is up to you to give it to them. (I will not pick apart the grammar of your work now, but consider this an open invitation to email me with any questions you may have regarding your work.)

I hope you continue to write and that you have a terrific summer, and that you'll visit (although definitely not your style) M224 next year.

Take care,
Ms. B

Sorry to pry, but are ypu going through spasms of questioning your mental health? don't laugh i'm serious! just some advice from someone who's been there, don't delude yourself into thinking you are someone, delude yourself into KNOWING you are. I can't stress how hard it is to get yourself out of the 'i'm worthless' phase. It took me over 5 years. So...if you need someone to just tell everything to, i'm here. you may not know me but we are probably closer than you think. Please, e-mail me. Even if it's just to tell me this comment was wrong.
Love and blessings,
-Eryn

Adam Weber replies: "uuh yes uh....hehe....*backs slowley away*...."

Hey! Sorry I haven't been back for a while, I've been busy. I like the new stuff! (new to me) You're a great writer, Adam, keep pluggin' away on that keyboard of yours and you'll catch a few publishing goons to play with, I promise. ^ - ^ LYAAF! byeee.... * jumps away with wiccan blingage and chains and safety pins rattling* THANKS FOR THE CUCUMBER COSTUME!! * runs into a wall before disappearing*

Hey Adam!!!! Commenting on your site... again. Just couldn't resist! Beautiful, beautiful work as always. Keep writing!!! ::gasps:: YOU SHOULD WRITE ME A STORY ABOUT THE JESTER!!! love ya, tty soon.

Adam Weber replies: "I SHOULD! cept it would be too explict wouldnt it....the things that trainer does can get pretty involved... i love you too, thanks for all the support you give me"

Adam, you are a really good writer and it'll take you somewhere someday I hope, if that's what you wish to do. (which i know you do lol) Anyways keep up the good work.

p.s. thanks megan for signing it for me b4 this is the real kyla signing it lol..not someone posing as me lol

Hey Adam,
I really liked it. I think you are a great writer, and I would love to see some other things you have written.
Heaven

Adam you are one realy good writer. How do you do it.

A good deal of raw talent here, with a scattering of geniuses.

Congratulations for being chosen Writer of the Day!