| 19 Oct 2003 |  God of Death |  Loading...HI! I came to say that I loved your stories. If you could do me a favor and chekc out the previous author I'd be much happier and might even consider not destroying all of the world. ^_^ | |
| 21 Oct 2003 | Kjell | Loading... I´ve read your two new stories, and I have a couple of little remarks. In the End: (Gee, doesn´t THAT sound familiar?  ) A small spelling error; "Ragnar’s was machine". I supposed it should be 'Ragnar´s war machine'? Also, it would be nice if you described the appearance of the mechs a little more. Currently you have no idea as to what they are supposed to look like. Vampire Hunting: Things happen a little too fast towards the end, and it´s not very clear that it´s the wolf that talks. This story would do better if it was a little longer, methinks. Other than that, it´s good.   Adam Stevens replies: "=>.<= ok, ok. I have lame titles. The only reason i came up with that one was... well... it was what i was watching at the time ok. hehe. anyways, thanks for the tips. i'll try for a re-write in a couple of days." | |
| 2 Dec 2003 |  Stephanie J. Walls | Loading... What wonderful stories you have. I've only read two so far... the ones that I've commented on, but I'll be back. I'm definately adding you to my favorites list after this. You have a very unique style of writing, at least in my opinion, and you have a supremely wonderful imagination. I think you should take a solid month and write down everything thats in your head before you forget. Adam Stevens replies: " Thanks. =^.^= Just hope the rest of my stories are up to standard. Enjoy your stay here. =^.^=As for that month? well, somehow i don't think my tutors would be too happy about that =>." | |
| 28 Dec 2003 |  Chelsea Castonguay | Loading... hello!! you look like an interesting person with interesting writing, so I am here to read! | |
| 30 Dec 2003 | Alexander E. Brittan | Loading... Yeah...what he said...*indicates to comment above* Hi ADAM! You don't know me but you commented on my page so here I am!! (to torture you) BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I was kidding
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Anyway, I must read your stories now, so toodles!
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| 19 Jan 2004 | Lisa Eyler | Loading... Hi! Started your stories, veeeeeeeery nice. I'm utterly impressed. Thank you for visiting my page. I'd've updated it more, but my computer crashed and this whole merge thingi is messing me up. See ya | |
| 4 Feb 2004 |  Jocelyn R. Schielke | Loading... You have quite the talent for actions scenes, which are hard to write at the best of times! Wonderful stuff you have here...
Thanks so much for your comment at my page, btw. I enjoyed returning the favor! | |
| 10 Feb 2004 |  Zan07 | Loading... Hewwo ^^ just stopped by to say hi! And to check on your library! Wee!! ^___^ | |
| 28 Jun 2006 | Anonymous | Loading... Hmm. This is a very interesting site. | |
| 26 Sep 2006 | Err, Adam Stevens | Loading... I was bored and googling my name, so I thought I'd say hi. We're also an estate agency in Hertfordshire. | |
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