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Crista Whyte

"Evermoon (poem)" by Crista Whyte

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Evermoon is a world void of daylight, at least for now. In this poem, a child from the future comes in hopes of finding a way to save Evermoon. I think I might expand this poem into a story, if I find the time :)
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Blessed be the child,

the Dreamer and the Night,

high upon the scraper’s ledge,

eyes down with tainted sight.

 

Standing thin against the wind,

a statue to shadow the Evermoon,

hairs blowing like intertwining snakes,

foreshadowing a time too soon.

 

Small heart clutched in sadness,

the child’s feet stuck to stone,

malnourished, graying hands

quaking to the bone.

 

A world in heavy darkness,

the child is the only to see

that the Evermoon is fading –

tides fading into sea.

 

From another world of future,

the child can only pray,

frozen to the scraper’s ledge,

of a dawn without the day.

 

Blessed be the child,

the Dreamer and the Night,

eternally standing high above,

eyes stricken with solemn fright.

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9 Nov 200545 Emily Maree Cullen
Brilliant! Very nicely done!! *first comment dance*

1 Crista Whyte replies: "Thanks!"
16 Jul 200645 Michelle Pimentel
Very lovely poem.I really think you should expand it into a story. I think the theme is interesting

:-) Crista Whyte replies: "thank you, and I'm actually thinking about it. When I first started writing it, it hovered between story and poem for quite some time. I guess we'll just have to see what happens 2 Thanks again!"
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About 'Evermoon (poem)':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Crista Whyte
 • Copyright: ©Crista Whyte. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Evermoon, Ever, Moon, Dark, Child, Blessed, Night, Dreamer, Dream
 • Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 276


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