| 27 Sep 2005 | Julia Meng | Loading...the pose of the guy standing (is his name chase?) is pretty good, like the legs. I like your composition, but it could be improved with more contrast through shading and whatnot. i think your proportions for their heads a a bit off, there could be more material near the top. for the guy on the ground, the arm reaching out does not quite a forearm, i would try drawing a slight round curve. Foreshortening can be very hard to work with. and you say it was your first try? i'm impressed. ooh, i love the way you did the plants~ sorry for such a long comment, and thanks for commenting on my dark elf picture! T. A. Markitan replies: "Thank you very much for the tips. I am trying to improve all the time and I appreciate the advice. Thank you for the comment " | |