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William A. Clayton

"To Marry The Sea" by William A. Clayton

SciFi/Fantasy text 34 out of 36 by William A. Clayton
 
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The ways of mortals and the Fey oft times mix, sometimes to their mutual dismay....
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←- The Dragon's Treasure | A Contest of Magic -→


There was a foolish man
who walked along the Sea one day
dreaming foolish dreams
at sunset, in his foolish way
He looked at all the beauty
in the earth, the sky, the trees
and made a foolish wish
while standing in the Sea


The Queen of all the fairies heard
and laughed with pure delight
for the mortal man had opened up
his heart to her this night
She called all her children to her side
and told them of her game
as they flew or danced into the stars
she took away his name

Now the man just stood there, for a while
not knowing what to do
but he saw the fairies laughing
and he began laughing too
This made them laugh the harder
as they fell about the sky
and he thought it was so beautiful
he just stood there and he cried

His tears of joy fell downward
like the rain falls from above
and the Sea tasted his spirit
and she felt the touch of love
No matter where he traveled to
while lost in the Queen's game
the Sea followed in his footsteps
and brought with her tears of rain

The other lands cried out in torment
so thirsty they had become
for the rains were life itself to them
and the Sea, she would not come
And the flowers died of emptiness
the fruits were hard and dry
and all the peoples suffered thirst
and their pleas did fill the sky

The fairies and the stars themselves
did not know just what to do
for they were trapped within the spell
of their creation too
The Queen herself was puzzled
of a solution was unsure
for she had not known the power
of a spirit that was pure

She asked an ancient wise one
if he could undo the spell
he only smiled a smile of sadness
and said he wished her well
"You have taken more than his name,"
he said, "He is no longer whole
you must find a way to give him back
his own immortal soul..."

For years and lifetimes did he wander
clad in grey from head to toe
and though he smiled at everything
his name he did not know
A little bird came to the Queen one day
and told her what was wrong
"If you cannot bring his soul to him
then fill his heart with song..."

The Queen of fairies and her children
saw just what they had to do
and they went about creating songs
in you and you, and you
A magic spell they did create
in a kingdom by the Sea
and guided there his footsteps
and showed him wonders there to see

They watched over his sleeping form
as it rested in his bed
and all day and night they sang to him
and whispered round his head
But though he laughed and smiled
his eyes remained empty of light and life
and the Queen said, "Enough of this joy
let us fill his heart with strife!"

So the game became quite different
the man suffered both night and day
the fairies made him stumble on
in their own unique way
Only one place gave him solace
only one spot remained free
and so each day his steps were drawn
to walk along the Sea

Each time he did she came to him
each time in different form
hoping that one would please him
and that he would be reborn
For the spell of love is powerful
and is master of your heart
and true love has no real ending
and oft times does never start

The man had been touched by magic
now for eons, many times
and when you are touched by starlight
some of it remains behind
He felt inside a something
he had never felt before
and spoke two words, "I am..."
then stopped, awaiting something more

He repeated those two words
again and again, both night and day
and then inside he'd listen
for the next word he would say
For though he still looked at the world
thru the eyes of a fool
he was beginning to learn wisdom
and the fairies listened too

He began to see inside him
heard a song inside himself
and he saw that he was half mortal man
and half immortal elf
One day he woke up as if from a dream
and spoke his brand new name
"I am Will," he said to no one there
"And I love to play this game..."

He heard music coming from the waters
he danced down to her side
and when he saw the Sea was crying
he asked her to be his Bride
The Queen of fairies bade him bend a knee
and made him her own Knight
and all the fairies danced around them
forever after in delight...

←- The Dragon's Treasure | A Contest of Magic -→

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25 Dec 200245 Amelia E. Moreno
This poem is awesome. It had great rythm. Not often can someone rhyme a poem so well and also tell a story beginning, middle and end so well. It sounds like something J.R.R Tolkein could write in one of the Lord of the Rings books. Really good 1

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "Thanks! To be compared to Tolkien in any way is an honor indeed!"
3 Jan 2003:-) Elisabeth Alberta Garrison
I enjoyed this a great deal. Lyrical and whimsical- beautiful- a lovely story and with a chanting lilt. Amazing!

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "I am glad that you enjoyed my poem so well. Your fair description makes it all worthwhile."
9 Aug 200345 Elizabeth K. Cook
Whee! Tis wunnerful! I had no idea you were so skilled in rhyme--excellent job! I really liked Will, it was kind of sad though that he couldn't remember his name. The ending was really cool though.

"Enough of this Joy!
Let us fill his heart with strife..." <---- That line really stood out to me. 2Forgive me if I misquoted it. Again, excellent job! *scampers off*

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "Thank you, Elizabeth! *smiles as she scampers off*"
18 Nov 2003:-) Janelle Desiree Highland
^_^ YAY!!! HAPPY!!! *hates sad endings* Well.. I can feel that it's happy... Oh, William.. you made it so well to read... not a tad bit dr. Suess-y.. (sp) yet it was easier to read, for me. ^^

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "dr. Suess-y? Oh, *Laughs* That would have been interesting. Yes, happy 'tis.. Thanks, Janelle, for the good comment, and the chuckle.."
17 Mar 200445 L. Shanra Kuepers
"Each time he did she came to him" - now that confuses me without a comma in between. And don't listen to me lest you know it's right for commas are ever my bane.

And now that's aside. Oooh... that was wonderful, truly wonderful, William! ^_^ Please forgive me my silence, all the praise I could say has already been said and I wish not to repeat.

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "*smiles* Mayhap, like myself, you are sometimes easily confused, dear Shanra! Frivolity aside, I will have to check that part, as it has been a long while since I have read this work. Would not surprise me, I oft times do over-reach my meager skills, as ideas pour into and out of, my heart. I am glad you liked this work."
24 Mar 2004:-) JM Larsson
That was delightful! No other word! It has been awhile since I could peruse your stuff, and I even now do not have the time, but this was wonderful! Original, but still staying within lines of a traditional fairy tale. Somehow, you worked it out. I have no other comments, and certainly no crits, so I will just say, "Lovely job!" [and a leetle thumbs up, just in case that's not enough. 12]

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "Thank you, Jessica, one word of honest praise means more than pages of flowery words. *Laughs* And the thumbs up is a kind and fun gesture, and appreciated!!"
27 Aug 2004:-) Jacqueline Fong
i think this is my second time reading this one . . . but I love it all the same! Though this time it almost made me cry! ^

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "AWWWWwwwww... *Presents a silk tissue* Made me cry to live it and write it, so that evens out...YAY! Jacque's bac"
24 Jan 2005:-) Rochelle Leya Watts
This reads very smoothly(reading it out loud is my favorite test of this), but not sing-songy. I think that is due you rhyme scheme and good use of meter. That you made a few of the rhymes approximate rhymes also helps with staying away from sing-songness(one of the things about alot of poetry that drives me nuts is this singy quality).
And I might add, it sounds like some folktale. The way you use the Queen of Faeries and the Sea probably helps that.
Good job.

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "Thank you, Rochelle. Your comments are very much appreciated, and I feel, to the point... Do keep writing and reading."
6 Feb 2007:-) Stephanie R. Schauer
Ooh! I liked this one. It's pretty and flows well, and has a great stoy to it that poems sometimes lack. ANd I loved the idea of the tricksters becoming ensnard in their own game. It was a nice idea.
My only quibble, and it's a pet peeve of mine, is the use of "thru" instead of "through". Unless talking about a sign, I'm of the scool that you use the full word. But, I may be ignornat, is this an accpeted word in poetry as, for example, "fishes" is?
Other than that, I really, really like this. And a wonderful, old fantasy, ending!

:-) William A. Clayton replies: "Glad you had fun, Stephanie. Pet Peeves are much better to have than Wild Peeves, house-trained and all. The "Thru" thing bothers some folk, which, sorry to say, bothers me not much at all. Not out of "Writer's Arrogance or somesuch, but merely because I like the look of the word, and it fits my "center alignment" style of presenting my poetry. The word is entered in the dictionary as a perfectly acceptable substitution for "through" as well. Speaking of word preference, I always preferred "Fishies" myself. Each to their own and all. Come again, and often, if you like. Thanks again!"
5 Dec 2007:-) Jordan "Nadroj" Galeles
Awwww! It was like a fairy tale come to life! So pretty!

61 William A. Clayton replies: "Well and glad then, and may the magic come alive for you.."
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About 'To Marry The Sea':
 • Created by: :-) William A. Clayton
 • Copyright: ©William A. Clayton. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Queen, Fairies, Elf, Song, Sea, Magic
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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