|28 Sep 2002|| William Henry Armstrong IV|
VERY nice detail on the wings. This is a great image, though a little heavy towards the bottom (not an issue though). A Minor suggestion; have him looking towards the point of the sword; it would look a little more natural, and it would help the image look more fluid and in motion. Good work. Will Green
replies: "thanks for the suggestion... "
|2 Oct 2002|| Patricia Faye Neal|
Let me see. I like your shading. Really good. But... His sword is too bit for his body, much less his hand which is drawn out of proportion to his body. And as for which way his head is looking, it doesn't matter. He could be looking down at the ground, or off to the side. Whatever. Anyway, there's my criticism. Hope it helps! Will Green
replies: "yes he hand and even his whole arm is too small but the sword is suppose to be huge... maybe its made of a really lightweight metal or something.... "