*first comment dance*

Welcome to Wyvern’s! ^^ *gives mandarin oranges*
I hope you’ll be adding more stories soon - the two I’ve read are quite interesting!

Thanks for the nice comments lol.... To clear things up, i realise my grammer is crap lol. English is my first language, but i have never written in the format we have to write this in so i was just a tiny bit confused lol....

Oh Thanks for the mandarin oranges!!!!!1

wow u got to see the wolves that stared in that movie!? thats sweet!!now im jelous! it takes encredible patiance to train a wolf. i wolf is its own dog,theres no holding it back from freedem and doing as it wills. thats what i love about keva,she is my best friend more then my pet cause she does as she pleases and comes home when she pleases. but unlike dogs they have a huge heart and its easily broken,they fall in love and stick with that mate for life. and sadly keva has had her mate taken from her,and its killing me to see her this way,im doing all i can just to make her eat and wag her tail,shes coming around a bit but it will be a long time b4 she recovers from this heartache.i just wished i could bring him back for her.have u ever heard the mournfull howl of a crying wolf?

Thats so sad! poor keva!! i think one of the first things that drew me to wolves was when i was watching a documentary on a small wolf pack in alaska that consisted of the male his mate and two cubs, anyway the female got caught on an ice flow while she was trying to get food for her family and fell in the water. the male wolf spent days searching and howling for her but she never returned.... I no its only T.V. but it was so heartbreaking to see this wolf that was "just an animal" showing emotions that "supposedly only a human can feel" It amazed me so much to see this wolf mourning for his mate. before then i thought wolves were just a cool animal but i realized they were so much more than that and from then on i decided to make it my life mission to work with wild wolves in canada or the like. i also have an evil plan of somehow introducing a thousand wolves into NZ lol they could eat all the dumb sheep!!

Your grammar may not be perfect* but your stories still have quality. Like someone else mentioned: they draw you in. They stay with you and make you think. And that is a quality not often found in simple short stories.

(*Not that I would be good at judging this as I’m not a native speaker.)

Joshua Luka Brooks replies: "thanks!!"

thanks Joshua for dropping by , i’ll be sure to read ur stories soon

Kia ora. [leaves pawprints to remember to return] ...might be an atheist thing, but possibly not, so: as I see it, we’ve one life and one world, so if we don’t want to live in a crappy one every person has to try and make it that little bit better.
So don’t wait for the world to end, fellow from a fair green land, or for someone else to improve it...go climb a tree and set your ear against the bark and listen, sow thistle seeds in carparks, nightwalk and befriend the small scuttling things...it’s a step. Someday we shall learn to ghostdance trees.