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Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs

"Pegasus" by Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs

SF&F Picture 5 out of 32 by Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs
 
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Inspired by a drawing I was doing at the time. Click here to see my pegasus!
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He makes his silent entrance

As I watch without a word,

He soars beneath the silv’ry light

On feather’d wings of bird.

 

He turns to face the darkened east

And slowly does he prance –

With a swish of tail, he now begins

His stately nighttime dance.

 

His gracefulness astounds me

As he courts the midnight skies;

He’ll call the moon to wakefulness,

And with it shall he rise.

 

He sings the stars a serenade

Of beauty and of love;

Enticing now the moon from depths

Below, to skies above.

 

I gaze upon this wondrous thing,

This guardian of the night –

And watching still, with hopes in hand,

My spirit now takes fight.

 

And as my soul flies on and up,

He catches at my eye,

And beckons me to follow him,

So I could learn to fly.

 

Resting now upon his back

And holding tight his mane,

My soul glides on, above the stars,

‘Til all the skies are plain.

 

And as we fly – this beast and I –

We talk of many things,

All the while the night sweeps by

Beneath his feather’d wings.

 

And still I soar above the stars

On this everlasting midnight stroll –

This Pegasus, he steals my heart,

Just as he steals my soul…

←- 'Dragon' (poem) | The Ancient Ones (poem) -→

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24 Mar 2002:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar
Oh goodness! First time I've seen a pegasus portrayed as anything but a bubbly happy good thing. Three cheers for you ^.^ *prances about happily*

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "*gasp!* really? first time? *does the dance of writing the first poem with a pegasus that isnt happybubbly* ^.^ Thanky again for yer comments!"
1 Apr 2002:-) N. L. Williams
My eyes!!!MY EYES!!!(don't ask how my eyes are hurting and I can still type) Have you seen versions of pegusas not so...uhhh...happy before?

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "hey, come back! you left me not knowing whether that was a good thing or not! hehehe ^.^ i will take it as positive reinforcement lol"
7 Apr 2002:-) N. L. Williams
Good thing about what? Me going blind or the poem? I'll hope you were referring to the poem, and yes, it is a good thing. I just couldn't finish commenting CAUSE I COULDN'T SEE!! 2

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "ohhhhh... lmao! please dont sue me for injury to the eyes! ; ) "
11 Apr 2002:-) Matthew Jared Tucker
Wow...this one is complex beyond words. The Pegasus seems to be a villian...stealing the body and soul as it carries it's rider aloft. The question for the reader to consider, though, is whether or not the rider has chosen to be stolen from...

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "hm... i dont think I even worked THAT one out... *smiles* I wrote this one and 'Demon' on the same day, and reading it now, (the way you put it), i can see similarities in the ideas portrayed there.. very interesting! ok, now i am being the wierdest one here, commenting about my own poem, like it wasnt me who wrote it... lol. yep, i like you, Jared! lol, you have profound and thought provoking comments! ^.~"
12 Apr 200245 Kimber 'Sarie' Moscardelli
Well done! ^_^; I am running out of comments to say! I've noticed a small pattern you use with poetry and you rhyme the 2nd and 4th lines. ^_^ Very creative!  hmph! a small pattern? Its my curse, i reckon! My bane! it will kill me someday! lol thanks for the output, anyway! *smiles*
9 May 200245 Brandie Minchew
Ooohh, I liked this. I didn't find Pegasus to be sinister as a soul-thief, but rather as a means for the story-teller to escape. Really nice use of words. Great poem!

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "ooh, thankyou! I'm glad u liked it!"
22 May 2002:-) Thomas J. Gibbs
That is a great poem to go with your drawing(Which all should go see!!!). To me it is symbolic of release and freedom. I feel nothing sinister about it. However, I think that you have done well in inspiring so many thoughts, questions and conflicting meanings from everyone. It is good to make people think so much. Bravo!

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "Bravo? oh, I am honoured to be complemented so by the highest of all Tom's. Thankyou, i am glad you thought so well of this. It had not meant to seem sinister, but if that works best.. heheh. It was, in my opinion, representing the ease with which I found myself drawn into the void, at the time I wrote this poem.. being carried almost against will (and yet not at all forcefully) past life itself, into essential nothingness. It seems foolish now, but it was very strangely real then. You know what I mean?"
31 May 200245 Sarah 'Saza' Asquith
Very nice poem!! I could never write a poem! *cries* but i don't mind as long as i get to read more of these great poems!!
I love the ryming!!!

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "hehehe Thankyou for reading, I'm glad you liked it! I dont always rhyme my poetry, but when i do, it's gotta be just right.. damn perfectionist I am 10! Thanks again! "
16 Sep 2003:-) Amory Koch
You are soo good at the non-cliche, making these poems that are far longer than the actual words (as a poem should be!) I could very easily write a paper on this, or even a couple of papers, not that I have time. >P I does sound like the demon poem, but there is a definite sense of being carried away against your will with you happily going along with it.

Unrelated note: How did you get multiple smilies? I want to do that! So spiffy.

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "Thank you! If you ever happen to write a paper on it, let me read it! lol.

And for your information... multiple smileys are done like this: smiley id="12" (now put that within these things: < >12
each smiley has a number, from 1 to 24. You just have to count up the number of the smiley you want to use. 10"
22 Jun 200445 Zita
Hmm, I don't see the pegasus as a soul stealer in this. I think it means that the person simply loves him and wishes he wouldn't leave. That's just me, tho. 12

12 Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "To everyone their own interpretation.. 2"
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About 'Pegasus':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs
 • Copyright: ©Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Pegasus, Mythology, Dream, Midnight, Poem, Flight
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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