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Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs

"The Ancient Ones (poem)" by Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs

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A poem i did while pondering the mysteries of Dragons...
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Passing stranger, come – sit down,

For I have chosen YOU today...

So sit and rest your weary feet,

and mind; list well to what I say!

 

For now I tellest none but thee

The Secrets of Our ancient hist'ry

And even then it's riddled through

With hidden streaks of myth and myst'ry...

 

Yes, We are the guardians of time

The Wise ones Who will ever last,

To tell the foolish, just like you,

Of Us, the wondrous Dragons past!

 

We cast the magick, say the rhyme,

That stirrs the sleeping, shifting sands

We created the magick We use

And passed it on to other hands.

 

But when We see the time-tower tumbling,

We'll shake Our tired heads and sigh,

And leave this world, so frail and crumbling

And then beyonde these worlds We'll fly.

 

We'll soar through time, through eternity!

Until We find another place,

We'll recreate Our history,

And give Ourselves another face.

 

Although the strangers will not know

Even then, We'll be the same.

And all to do to reveal Our truth

Is whisper out Our Hidden name…

 

Sylverwolffe

←- Pegasus | The beheading -→

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23 Mar 2002:-) Cassandra Lee Duncan
Good. You even managed to make it ryme. I can't write good poems. I'm really not much of a writer, I just think of things and write them down, and even after I've edited them a hundred times, it's still not good, so I've given up on that for a few months, and I'm doing more art.

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "You dont have to edit your thoughts as they come from yer head to the page. the way they hit the page is usually the way they stay.. unless its rhyme poetry.. *mutters darkly about unrhymable words*. but heyz, poetry doesnt need to rhyme! yep, some of the best poetry there is couldnt rhyme even if you said it in japanese or french.. not that i can speak japanese OR french.. *wanders off, deeeep in foreign *thought*.. thanky for da comment!"
24 Mar 2002:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar
*blushes* I read this before but forgot to comment. Sowwy... I've read this over a few times and every time I do.. I picture a bard in a local tavern singing it and then a sorta picture in picture of the Ancient Ones. *prances about and throws fistfuls of shiny pennys about* ^.^ Good Good.

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "*pats celesta on the head* hey, dats ok.. i didnt comment some of your stories, even though they were damn good.. hm, i s'pose it does seem like some old traveller telling a tale/song in a tavern.. *runs around trying to pick up the pennies* hey, dont waste those! i may need them to buy a new computer! lol *saunters off, muttering darkly about stupid malfunctioning pieces of cybermetal..* ^.*"
3 Apr 2002:-) ´Disco´ Vic Alfieri
hey there, just thought i'd pop in and visit my nieghbour, i read your stories, and they're really great, i'm about to go visit your art page after i write this and i'll leave you a comment there....

I liked how you rhymed so well in the Ancient Ones poem, it was almost perfect rhyming couplets. I try to have at least one rhyme when i write poetry, i think it gives a poem more character, makes it flow better, and helps you recognise it as a poem.....

Well, that's it from me, if you wanna visit and leave me a comment feel free (hint hint ;~)) You'll find most of what i've written on my page as far as stories go, but if you wanna see my poems you'll have to go here www.angelfire.com/biz3/poetscorner okay???

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "  yay! my neighbour! we should have big site-warming parties for all the new places round the neighbourhood! *grins* thankyou for commenting, i am on my way directly to your library, and to see your poetry ^.^"
10 Apr 2002:-) Olga Redko
I like this one too. I seriously believe that you can be write longer poems, if you want to, and maybe turn them into long narratives? Like a ballad or something? That would be cool.

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "*grimaces* My problem: I have this horrible dislike of commitment... lol. i have started a potential novel the other day, (prologue and poem coming soon) and it does have some potential, so i will FORCE myself to get somewhere on that... *sigh* hehheh"
11 Apr 2002:-) Matthew Jared Tucker
You have an art for the poem, it would appear...I think that your poem is missing something, however. What it is, I can't place...there just feels to be something gone. Perhaps only the Ancient Ones can tell us what...

:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "I guess its strange, because i kind of got that feeling, too. yeah, well i wrote this and the dragon poem over a year ago, when i didnt know much about dragons at all. although i cannot say that fact has changed a whole lot, compared to what there is to know lol ~.^ and yep, i do like writing poetry a lot more than stories... i suppose i can express myself a great deal better, and there is no prerequisite (as it were) of how it should turn out or something like that... wow, thankyou greatly for all the comments!"
12 Apr 200245 Kimber 'Sarie' Moscardelli
Nicely fitted in a pattern, something is a little vague but I'm not quite sure, maybe if you edit it, you could add in a stanza being a little more descriptive. Very nice. I love your poetry!yeah... *contemplates* i guess it was because i wrote "dragon" at the same time, and i kinda left all the description to there.. mind u, this was written over a year ago, so... hey thanx, kimber! i am glad u like it
17 Feb 200345 Nazneen
very nice poetry based on a dragon. maybe you should write a poem on how the dragon got its name that would be interesting. Anyway that poem has got beautiful words to describe it. KEEp IT UP!! 12

12 Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "Hmm, interesting idea. Thank you for the comment!"
16 Sep 2003:-) Amory Koch
Heh, make it sound like Sylverwolffe is the hidden name. (intentional?) This poem is not as good as the others I've read so far. It seems like it is confused what it wants to be. I can see pulling this apart into a story about said traveller, the dragons, etc and a poem that is a cryptic dialogue of the dragon talking to the person, like he goes into trance and recites this old prophecy or something. Perhaps they are searching for the one to tell them the name they have forgotten *gets carried away* Obviously, still a great thought poem! A lot of cool ideas in this peice, but not so cohesive, you know?

12 Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "lol, no, that was not intentional. I get what you mean. Thanks for the comment!"
24 Oct 2005:-) Dan Shevock
Great poem. I picture an old sage (shape-shifter type) telling this story to children around a fire, in a medieval style town.

19 Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs replies: "*gasp!* a comment... wow... 2 anyway, yeah, I can see that... Speaking of it as if it were but a story devised for their entertainment... 12 Thanks for the comment! 2"
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About 'The Ancient Ones (poem)':
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 • Created by: :-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs
 • Copyright: ©Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Poetry, Ancient, Dragonlore, Mystery
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
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