John sharp, SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by John sharp at Elfwood. John is 30 years old, sees the world through a cracked lens and then writes about it for pleasure and humour.

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Date	Name	Comment
2 Mar 2009	Marika Viklund	Loading... Aha. Is it often causing problems like that? Maybe it’s got some virus? John sharp replies: "doubt it. it is just underpowered for the operating system"
6 Mar 2009	Marika Viklund	Loading... Ok. John sharp replies: "Good news! New laptop, so shouldn’t be a problem ever again!"
22 Mar 2009	Marika Viklund	Loading... That’s great!
23 May 2009	Monserrat Martsnore Gutierrez	Loading... Hello, I invite you to read my stories. John sharp replies: "thanks for stopping by. I will try to do just that soon. Did you read anything you liked here?"
30 May 2009	Monserrat Martsnore Gutierrez	Loading... Thanks for tagging my story Legend of the Volcanoes, see ya soon! John sharp replies: "you are most welcome. I will look at more of your stuff in due course"
1 Jun 2009	Kristynn Amara Halterman	Loading... Hello. Thank you for posting on my lonely profile John sharp replies: "your welcome. Stumbled upon it when I was reading someone’s stories-I tend to follow folks comments and see where they take me. I like a good story, and artwork can inspire me frequently. Feel free to stop by and read my work, or not as you like"
23 Jun 2009	Anon.	Loading... Just some advice for your stories.I dont like how you always begin youre sentences with words like "The " "it "i" or "my." Have you ever heard pf a CARP PIE? funny name I know but it stands for writing techniques that really improve your’e writing. Like how you structure sentences-like starting a sentence with an "ing" word and using more varied punctuation like semi colons,commas and hyphens.Give it a try then i garuntee youre story will be much better John sharp replies: "Thanks for your feedback. I’d like the opportunity to return the favour, if you have a profile here. I have not heard of the technique, though I started looking it up at your suggestion. Care to elaborate?"
4 Jul 2009	Jill O Connell	Loading... wow you have done so much more then me ): well you are 9 years older then me... i want to write short stories and possably a novel 2. can you read my stuff and tell me what you think? sorry for bothering you.. i will get around to reading your stuff too just not right now (sorry) John sharp replies: "Hi Jill thanks for stopping by. Yes, I will have a look at your stuff if you like. Enjoy your time here. Welcome to elfwood"
9 Jul 2009	Jill O Connell	Loading... thank you (:
17 Aug 2009	Linda Trude Jansson	Loading... hello^^ how are you? John sharp replies: "Hi Linda, been a while. Been good thanks. Very busy at work. How have you been?"
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