"... pain and grief remain..." by Nadia ´kyuhketsuki´ bader

(tosses her some prozac) Grand picture! And you've done the selves perfectly (my lines tend to dislike general straitness) And the background adds to the pic, plus there's lovely expression there. Congrats! A salute to you!

Don't care for the words much, but it's an excellent background... and good use of shading, proportion, all that good stuff.

Mmmm....yes....pain...suffering....my kind of stuff...

Woah..

N where did u get ur scanner? ... -.-'

This is very akira-like. Because I instantly thought of the original akira, being stored in containers similar to those on the left side. And akira lost his left arm as well. (Was it left or right?). This could very well be the complex right before Tetsuo bursts it open, if the character had been Tetsuo, that is.

You know what sets you apart from most others I have seen. Your wonders with perspective. And neat backgrounds (two sides of the same coin). Incredibly well drawn.

About the character herself, yes, you have succeeded in making her seem desperate and half-dead. At least wishing she would be dead. Don't know how I can fit this into shadowrun, but it may be a npc the Pcs can help if they wish. If they do, she may tell you what horrors exist beyond this point. Only babbling.

Now some cyberpunk, uh?.. .)