|12 Nov 2004|| Katie|
I too, would choose a cat if I were to morph into another animal. After all, they are the proudest and most elegant of all animals. Lovely poem. I like your play with words. Ashley R. Wynn
replies: "Hey thanks for all the comments! Now I gotta go read all your stuff... The Witch, Lady, & Knight thing looks interesting..."
|9 Dec 2004|| Jessica L. Stachyra|
Ooooo!! ^_^ Love the short phrasing here, flows nicely together, no abnormalities in rhythem...awesome!
It was just the right length with just the right amount of words, very well done! Ashley R. Wynn
replies: "Hee hee. Thanks. I'm touchy about poetry. I've had too many classes and have had to write one too many sestinas."
|14 Dec 2004|| Rashala Kramori|
That was thought provoking and abstract- I want to see more of this type of work posted.......smile wood maiden Ashley R. Wynn
replies: "ROFL I ain't no maiden. But thanks for then extra nice comments. I REALLY liked the way this piece turned out myself. And that's rare, especially for poetry. I spent a month or two on it, cutting bits away and changing words. I had crossed my fingers while it was in the ticket queue, hoping to get one of those gold stars. I'd just read this article in woodworks about what the mods hate about poetry. I guess they hate furries too. ;D"
|12 Jan 2005|| E. Torrens|
I love this! You get the character's personality across very well - I especially like the last verse again! You're really good at a memorable last verses. Ashley R. Wynn
replies: "You've got to end it man, so you might as well nail it down good and tight. "
|9 Sep 2005|| Adylia <Adylia@luu...com>|
Wow, that was soo amazing poem!! I love cats!
Good job, the poem is just awesome, I like it!! x_x
|3 Oct 2005|| Underbelly (curly)|
Love it,not usually into cats, but you described them in a
whole other awsome way,loved your poem.
|12 Apr 2006|| K. ´Karahatay´ Fink|
Heheheh. I like this one. I like the imagery you've used. The words, for me, seem to flow better than in Incubus. Also, I think the play on the title is quite funny. Lovely poem! Ashley R. Wynn
replies: "This one was written a year or two after Incubus, from bits gleaned from my notebook margins. It's probably my favorite by far, and the only one of my own poems that I've ever read out loud at a public reading."
|28 May 2006|| C. 'Liari' Seidel|
Well, meow. *grins* What a wonderful little piece. Delightfully wicked and playful.
|22 Sep 2006|| Anonymous|
Sweet. Has a sexy, yet fantasy/horror effect to it. Truly a great work. I love it.
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