|22 Mar 2004|| Ria de Guzman- Walton|
You've created characters-can you ellaborate? Maybe draw more of them-let us know more about them. Would like to see more. John S. Howes
replies: "to elaborate i really would have to make a comic about it... though i have the plot out lined and planned up until this chapter which is somewhere around the 7th chapter. If i was going to make a comic on this there would be certian things i wouldn't want to reveal just yet and just trying to elaborate the basics would take up quite some space... Tell you what though, I'll make more of the Intro to this comic that i already have up to help explain a few things. and yes i'll be drawing plenty more of them... and have been."
|25 Jul 2004|| Jenna 'Fireheart' Montgomery|
Wow, it's amazing. You make a great anime artist. But, you did ask for constructive criticism, so I will lend my cause to such: The two standing on the sides facing out have very well drawn faces, but if you are aiming for anime try to make the legs a little longer. Wonderful job shading on the girl in the center, I love the hair-covered eyes. Try coloring this and see how it comes out! It could be interesting. Yeah, that's all. Sorry if I made any mistakes in my criticism. John S. Howes
replies: "no no your critisim is fine this was really one of my first major attempts at anime i am improving quite a lot though. i'll try to put up a bit more anime in my next update."