"the Mermaid" by Sharon Kelly Adams

Yes... nice imagery indeed. And more then that... there's something fantastical about this poem... it's like a dream that floats just beyond tangible reach. - Warlord of the Three Lost Virtues

........................Damn........I dunno if I like it more than More Than....O.o o.O hmmm.......I love 'em both equally! It's SO kewl!!!! I could see it in my mind.....Made me think of Final Fantasy 7 for some reason...

i wish i did things that cool in english but then, i'd have to write as good as you to have the same affect, and, well, that would be useless, so *shrug* anyways, YOU did beautifully at it bet you aced the class

very good, Angel. Paints a Picture is my mind.

That gives me a nice picture

Hey, its kinda reminds me of a pic i did called serenity, olny my mermaid is drifting, not sleeping... Cool, ioften do descriptive wrting like this. I like it.

wow. Draw a picture of a mermaid. you should do a riddle.

Very nice discriptions and imagery. It was quite good.

I like the peaceful mood of this... *smiles contentedly*

I'm known for being critical. I don't like leaving a comment without some (hopefully) constructive criticism. So therefore: Take what you can use, and let the gulls have the rest.
The first two lines work well. Then I cringed at the word 'lullaby'. Too cliché for my taste.
Then comes the word 'worms'! That just doesn't fit the mood you're creating, does it? And talking of worms as 'fine' just throws me.
And then, of course, the waves don't make much noise at the bottom of the sea, do they? You'll have to be close to shore for that to happen. And describing that sound as a 'tune' also seems to miss the mark. Now, most people don't notice this, and I probably wouldn't have either, if I hadn't stumbled on the earlier words.
So anyway, those were just some five pennies' worth.