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"The Image of Death" by Jessica Ng

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I believe it was written on Oct 25 2000. Umm... it was an entry for a halloween writing competition unfortunately I never found out who won and gave up waiting. I probably missed it. Anyway, tell me what you think? I don't write things like these too often, and when I do they usually don't turn out too great.
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It was in the dead of the night and the city lay in slumber. Only but scant few remained awake at this unholy hour, the witching hour. Among those were the frightened little boy woken from a nightmare, the night owls, and those that simply would not, or could not sleep.

One such was a woman with short raven black hair and pale skin clothed in a knee length dress of dusty brown. She sat with eyes closed cross-legged on the floor of her balcony with only a thin shawl around her shoulders for protection from the night cold. Her name was Eos.

Behind her, the glass sliding doors were wide open and inviting; the night wind accepted that invitation and blew into them, causing the curtains to resemble dancing white apparitions. The apartment was dark, only illuminated by soft moonlight. The doorknob turned and the door slid open slowly, Eos seemed not to notice, or simply not to care.

A vague, dark creature entered the apartment. The light from the hallway seemed to bend away from the midnight visitor, leaving it in darkness. It moved silently into the shadows of the apartment and closed the door.

Eos opened her eyes slowly, looking at nothing, listening.

It crept with near silence, near silence until it knocked over a ceramic pot and hissed what strangely sounded like a curse in some unknown language.

Brow furrowing in annoyance, Eos spoke. "Leave me."

The faint sound of movement paused as it hesitated, then continued to approach her. Her lips thinned in irritation at this and in a smooth motion she stood and turned to look at the intruder.

The trespasser froze only a few paces away when she turned, near enough for the moonlight to outline its features; not that she needed the light to know what she was up against. It could only have come from a nightmare or been born from a deranged or demented mind.

It was slightly larger than a big dog, with the body of a rat covered in miniscule scales instead of fur and a neck longer than any rodents'. Upon its feet at the end of each scaled toe was a hooked claw, and from its back protruded bat like wings. Its head was arrow like, resembling that of a snake's in shape. Its bright orange eyes glinted in the darkness; spreading its wings and raising its head to full height, it snarled revealing sharp cruel fangs. A long, thin tail forked at the end lashed about like a whip.

"I am the image of Death."

Unfazed and unsurprised as if faced with this situation almost every day, she hardly blinked. In a barely civil manner, Eos addressed the creature, which then regarded her curiously, cautiously.

"I don't know you," it hissed after a while.

"No, you wouldn't know me personally, but you should know of Me. Look at me, and know who I am," with that she mentally 'flung' selected memories at the creature.

The creature shrieked in fear and cowed almost immediately. Its head to the floor and its body crouched in a defensive position. Its chest raised and fell rapidly, moonlight reflected off of its scales in blue hues. Its bright orange eyes were open wide and full of terror refusing to meet her gaze.

"P-p-pleasse…"

"Leave me."

The door swung open at that moment and without hesitation, the creature scrambled out of the room just as the door closed, narrowly missing its forked tail. The wind blew causing the curtains to again dance as she stood for a few moments longer, silhouetted by the moonlight.

She turned and fell gracefully into the cross-legged position she had taken before the interruption. All was still again. She was in all appearance a young woman with pale skin sitting on the balcony of her apartment on a bright moon's night. All, except for her eyes; eyes that mirror the pain and loneliness of a thousand years. Beautiful gray eyes framed by dark long lashes, eyes that held no life. They were the eyes of Death.

←- She Lives in Dreams | The Finish Line -→

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24 May 200145 Me Jane, you Tarzan? ....ehr....
Funny, everytime I read/see Death, the image from Terry Pratchett's Death Of Rats keeps popping in my head... *small, black robed figure appears* SQUEAK? Yes, you.
9 Aug 200145 Lisa M. Fagan
And you didn't tell me you updated because....? Anyway, wicked cool!
15 Oct 2001:-) Ben League (aka Sir Asher)
I really like the imagery and description, but I'm not entirely sure I "got" it. If the woman was Death, then what was the creature claiming to be the Image of Death? And why did it not know her?
But maybe these are questions you prefer to leave unanswered... I can understand that.
19 Dec 2001:-) Jason Ellis
Ah, there I was wondering where it was all going and that it was finishing abruptly, then in the last few sentences everything just went whack in my head. What an impact you made with that ending! The image of death seemed rather different to the usual one; I wonder about its origins. It is very nice to get out of my own gallery and read someone elses work and I like your free flowing style.
29 Dec 200145 ELLA ella.t100@...>
I thought it really scary!!!!!!!!! reading this short story i felt i was Eos for just afew moments.

:-) Jessica Ng replies: "Ella, I can't send you an e-mail to reply, it rebounds to me so I'll reply here. I never expected to hear that spoken about any of my written pieces. To put someone into the character of the story was something reached for with despairing hands. I didn't believe it possible to reach with mine. And that this piece would actually be scary, it seemed too much to even dream for. Thank you."
7 Feb 2003:-) Gardner 'Jameal' Williams
If death is so beutiful what then can be said of life? Images pop into my head h=when i read this and and...

9 Jessica Ng replies: "and now I find that my primary e-mail address bounces half the time (just... _great_). Images? And? And what?"
7 Jan 200545 Ashlee
That is so beautiful and death you potry it as a female why most say its a handsome male guess its not i think it is wounderful it sent chills through my body it also gave me a high i love it i really do

2 Jessica Ng replies: "The response (mine) is a little late, whoops. I think I'm fond of both ideas, the beautiful handsome male and/or female as Death... but then I tend to like good looking bad guys too *chuckle* Though I agree, the handsome man as Death may be more popular now than the traditional grim reaper or a woman. Thank you so much for your comment, I'm very glad that you had such a response to it and shared that with me."
25 Dec 200645 Faithful Believer
I think you should have it made into a book. Poems are,after all,one of the best inspirations in life.
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About 'The Image of Death':
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 • Created by: :-) Jessica Ng
 • Copyright: ©Jessica Ng. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Eos, Night
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