Hi, and welcome to Wyvern. So far it looks like you have a good start. I'm happy to see another poet here besides myself. I hope you don't mind me giving you a few pointers that have helped me become a better writer. First, I always go back and rewrite my short poems and try to develop them more (if I can). Next, I always go back over them to try and give them a more advanced vocabulary. My Thesaurus has become my best friend ^-^ Lastly, I try to change my style for my different poems. I use different techniques that always seem to make it more interesting (ie:rhyme scheme, imagery, rhythm, ect...). I hope you don't take offense. These were the things people told me for years, and I just want to pass my knowledge to you. Keep writing and always strive to be better. ^-^

Nice work here. You need to advertise your poetry more. It's sad that folks don't visit the Library. There's a lot of good work going on in here.

Yay!!!!! MORE POETS!!!!! *giggles* That's all I have on my Page. Poems!! *giggls* Well I'll be back after I read all your poems k? *grins and starts to read 'em*

Your poems are really beautiful and touching! You have a great deal of talent )

Really beautiful poems.
Very touching and moving, amazing how you get such feeling so few lines on two of them.
Love you writing!

~Helen

Heyla. Just playing the comment game (which is noticibly more difficult and time consuming when played in a literary art's context!) and you're my victem. ^^ You're poetry, while slightly cliche, has strong and beautiful messages behind it. Don't be afraid to play with your words, and to stretch. Writing takes a patience and honesty that few people are willing to express; be proud of your gift, and keep fighting the good fight. God bless!

Flash mob random rally at J. Atlas Burke's! No reasons, no lucid sentences, we aim to randomise him feet first into the Century of the Fruitbat! Down with Order! Chaos forever! Go! [Yes, if you just come prod me once you'll be shunted to the top of my reading list. I love newbies. Have a happy muffin.]